tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post3146891734208418687..comments2023-05-26T14:13:15.524+03:00Comments on My Poetry Scrapbook: I Wrote This PoemMichael Onsandohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16754343948102047946noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post-42524902428721942332011-01-25T16:22:42.375+03:002011-01-25T16:22:42.375+03:00Awesome piece mate. Officially a fanAwesome piece mate. Officially a fanYulemboismndialalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15234872585772287015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post-69803987195794311792011-01-23T20:08:38.745+03:002011-01-23T20:08:38.745+03:00More white and red than doves or roses are.More white and red than doves or roses are.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post-7368267502105297592011-01-19T22:24:02.277+03:002011-01-19T22:24:02.277+03:00so sweet r the words,for i am tempted to read it t...so sweet r the words,for i am tempted to read it thru' the tenth tym<br /><br />that's a gr8 piece Michael!JOEhttp://joseph4otieno.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post-50778389176272811932011-01-19T15:22:39.335+03:002011-01-19T15:22:39.335+03:00Anything you write about in its own way has its ow...Anything you write about in its own way has its own beauty. You could write about writing about writing and it would still look nice. Thanks J :-)Michael Onsandohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16754343948102047946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post-62239598071400832282011-01-18T20:23:06.613+03:002011-01-18T20:23:06.613+03:00"Because the sweet sounds and the short sylla..."Because the sweet sounds and the short syllables,<br />Were eating at my mind like animalistic cannibals,"<br /><br />Thats the feeling!!!<br /><br />I echo Wambuiwairua too.....<br /><br />Funny how we can write about writing and still make it beautiful...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post-4328204190918485112011-01-18T15:24:19.989+03:002011-01-18T15:24:19.989+03:00Richard of york gained battle in vain... I remembe...Richard of york gained battle in vain... I remember :-) Thanks :-)Michael Onsandohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16754343948102047946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post-82114472193293118322011-01-18T13:10:03.630+03:002011-01-18T13:10:03.630+03:00Richard of York. lol. I can't even remeber tha...Richard of York. lol. I can't even remeber that complete rhyme. Good stuff. Good flow. :o)theShyNarcissisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12773969775366667827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post-17313144617323317882011-01-18T12:50:52.766+03:002011-01-18T12:50:52.766+03:00Ed... Looks can be decieving. Though yeah it was f...Ed... Looks can be decieving. Though yeah it was fun. :-)<br /><br />Wambui.. I love that theme sometimes I just write because the words have come to my mind not because I was touched by some event or something.. Yayy to the piece indeedMichael Onsandohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16754343948102047946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post-58684476698963500802011-01-18T12:34:02.390+03:002011-01-18T12:34:02.390+03:00You do like the theme writing for writing's sa...You do like the theme writing for writing's sake, don't you? And I agree that words will eat at the mind of the one who doesn't put them on paper (or perhaps into the song or painting or mime...) like animalistic cannibals.<br /><br />Yay to the piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1766446821130146121.post-67725314162216948092011-01-18T12:31:04.118+03:002011-01-18T12:31:04.118+03:00And it does sound like fun! I liked the Richard of...And it does sound like fun! I liked the Richard of york line... I guess i have no more comments....oh, I still hate the way you make it look too easy.cerealinaboxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06620029165844483890noreply@blogger.com